Black Poetry : For The Time Being

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by poeticlyspeakin, May 12, 2003.

  1. poeticlyspeakin

    poeticlyspeakin Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    lookin for love, where love doesnt exist
    it started with obsession, then grew to a wish
    im changing myself, in order to change u
    knowing, in order to find happiness, i have to exchange u

    broken hearts, broken promises, living secrets
    problems, stress, a lot is missing, discreteness

    im blind and u refuse to see the vision
    its tearing up our hearts, we continue to ignore the division
    its loud and clear, we refuse to listen

    if this means that i have to put up with this just to be with u, then...
    for the time being, ill handle it.
     
  2. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i understand this perfectly.....u took the words rite out of my mouth...lovely poem...

    ~ lovely ~
     
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    poeticlyspeakin Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i def. feel what ur sayin.......but sometimes its just best to let go.once again, tyte poem much love :)
     
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    Smooth joynt! diggin it!

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