Black Poetry : For The Scent Of A SISTAH

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  1. caramelpython

    caramelpython Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I can still hear the sound of lace brushing
    against your
    shapely thighs
    As revealing panties drop to reveal heaven’s gate.
    Lie down and close your eyes
    Not too tightly
    prop up your knees and part your legs
    I anxiously and slowly lower my head
    My hands slide beneath your beautifully
    rounded
    African form
    I lift you to meet my kiss
    As I get closer the sight of your curls made
    sheen by
    the silky moisture produced by Love’s
    HEAT brings
    a tear to my left eye
    The eye closest to my heart
    I lift you
    My head descends
    I realize exactly what is about to happen
    and tears fill
    both of my eyes
    the anticipatory roll of your hips brings the
    scent of
    your love
    The scent of A SISTAH
    I ignore the pain caused by the swelling of
    my natural
    sin that is sheathed by thin skin
    because I see your folds
    They are so swollen
    The kiss begins
    And the pain between my legs becomes the
    only thing
    that is anchoring me to reality
    As I explore fantasy with my eyes nose and
    tongue
    the salty-sweet mix of my tears and the
    honey from
    your fully opened jar
    Caress the back of my throat
    Your moans fill my heart, which wants to lay
    still
    Because it is curiously awaiting answers
    Further probing causes our toes to curl
    The answers come in waves
    Waves of immeasurable Pleasure
    You go limp in my hands and I cry joyfully at
    the
    beauty of you
    I am grateful

    Lets do it again

    11/30/2003
     
  2. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :blush: I was almost falling asleep in my chair and then I read this....This is so hot it's burning up the page, but you must know this, caramelpython :grin: Flow on, you naughty poet of the week....
     
  3. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    indeed this was blazing and hot out the fire place
    tyteeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!! brutha
     
  4. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    computer all hot now...
    dang..
    i likes this nice drop
     
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    ah yes Vigorous and Energetic
    flame the path poet of the week
    you are indeed bringing the heat
    very nice
    Peace
     
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    Nearly rendered unconscious....

    you made my heart race...as I raced to unfold the next line
    and then my soul lost control...and dived into your flow...
    swimming in your vibe....struggling to stay afloat..
    cuz this was some heavy... :blush:

    :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown:
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    Oh my god...
    Caramel...I can't keep reading your like this...lol
    I'm not sure it's good for my health, lol
     
  7. Hiclass_female

    Hiclass_female Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ............................
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    Speechless, brotha
    You did your thang!!! :jumping:
     
  8. caramelpython

    caramelpython Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Olakuoto........... just a lil sum'n sum'n to keep you warm.. glad you enjoyed it.

    watzinaname..... hey whats romance without the flame of pure passion.. lol

    $$RICH$$ .... thanks broter, I have read some of your spicy post so this is a honor

    mzblkangel...... even an angel needs some spice at times..*smile*

    Bluewater...... ty sweetheart ,glad yu enjoyed it.


    angelicsage .. sorry sage, next time I will try to be a litle more passive. I think.. ll


    Hiclass_female ... thank you lady.
     
  9. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    oldie but hottie....

    see i knew i should not have read it again...
    computer on fire..smh....
    i need a smoke now well the computer do :smokin:
     
  10. 7thPoet

    7thPoet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :flame:
    this joint was so hot i believe i can actually smell that 'scent of a sistah'
    keep writin' brotha, it make my job a little easier...
     
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