Black Poetry : For the rain today.....

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Archival, Mar 12, 2006.

  1. Archival

    Archival Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    for the rain today
    I look away
    to refect on life
    with the one I love
    the kisses
    near misses
    the troubles and trials
    no matter the outcome
    we walk the miles
    in joy and in pain
    and fun till it's gone
    making me wonder
    why it took so long
    for the rain
    to find someone like you
    and fall on us both
    as we shelter each other
    under love true
    all anew
    for the rain today
    I look back to say

    I love you, now and forever



    Just feeling the rain today, first rain here in phoenix in 144 days.

    Infrequently Soulful,
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    For two to meet no matter the weather. All troubles seem to fade. What a lucky brother. Fate had it planned for you to meet. The rain was just a factor and the winning treat.


    This is such a great flow. It is so true to life.

    I had a simular thing happen before. I spent time with a lady I truly adore. She blew me away not in her words and phrase. But in the fact I had her attention focused my way. We talked about some deep things and facts. I gave her my number and asked she call me back. To spend some of her time with me. For only a woman can make a man agree. Let me tell you about her before I'm thorough. She has the power to stop time. When she comes in a room. For a moment she was all mine and on track.
    I gave her my number I hope she calls back. Like you on that day. It was raining in fact. What is it about rain? On that thought I'll look back. What ever it was. I was there. She was there. All that matters.
     
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    wow poet i like this flo do continue to flo on. i cant wait to see more of your work.
     
  4. Archival

    Archival Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    And thats exactly how it is.

    You know Hodee, I couldn't put it better myself.....

    And Nevar, you know me, member here since back in 2001 (afronet before that), 40 something posts to my name. My flows come, Infrequently Soulful.....


    That said, thanks, and I'll try to make time to flow a little more often.

    Infrequently Soulful,
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    beautifull.....






    welcome poet..






    Loveauroraflower:heart:
     
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    Archival Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    And thanks....

    And thanks for your beautiful flows as well......

    Archival
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    awesome write poet !
     
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    Wow poet ou delivered that fire
    This was real good poet-Iloved this
    Much love poet
     
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    beautiful:love:
     
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    Archival Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks

    Thanks for the chance to share....


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