Black Poetry : for the good.....

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by herlove, Feb 24, 2003.

  1. herlove

    herlove Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    for the good of those......
    all ??? things they purpose
    yet i stand up on tippy toes
    barely reconize the friend from the foe
    i look into the distance although i am persistent
    at times i dread the distance
    faintly i hear the long forgotten dreams earnestly i listen
    ponder wether their in reach only to the christian
    as i bath in the aroma of the sinner i contemplate all that i'm missing lonely i travel in the shadows of contiueously wishing....
    sadly i decieitfully partake of that which seems
    and in silence hear the screams
    and rarely do i feel the rays of sunlights beams
    for choices i chose a path .. the wrong teams
    and fall to the wayside it always seems

    tend to see life in colors of green
    and dout if i feel redeemed ...
    and for LOVE the constant dope fene
    and if any goodness is left is goes unseen

    for the good..... doesn't sound so good
     
  2. poeticdelight

    poeticdelight Member MEMBER

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    tight flow herlove

    keep writing

    one

    pd

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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    u said it loud & clear i felt this .......great flow !