Black Poetry : For the first time

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by quest, Jan 23, 2002.

  1. quest

    quest Active Member MEMBER

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    -For the first time-

    When I walked through the door
    I witnessed a beauty I wanted to explore
    Due to my curoisty I wanted to know more--
    More about the essence of you,
    and the thoughts that roam your mind

    The things that make you smile...
    The things that motivate you to climb and,
    strive for the goals you seek.

    It amazes me that in one sight
    I was able to catch it all from a smile
    but your beauty paved the way for my thoughts to run a mile

    So if you catch me staring...don't mind me
    I am just left in distraught
    because I was caught up
    from witnessing love for the first time.

    quest ( ache el )
     
  2. mizdee2002

    mizdee2002 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    sweet. very sweet.

    dee:heart:
     
  3. thepoetsean

    thepoetsean Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    que.kay.dubyou. (questknowledgewords)

    like i told you...lately I have been putting your words down....THEY TOO HEAVY!!!

    fiyah lyte*

    tytewurk*
    :nuts:
    sean
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    dis piece

    reach down deep inside me like a love
    touching my mental.......nice flow :heart: :D
     
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    Reason Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Bravo Poet!

    Lovin this piece of art hea!!!

    Much Respect
    Reas
     
  6. quest

    quest Active Member MEMBER

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    mizdee2002,RICH,REASON,SEAN

    what's up fam i just wanted to say thanx for the reply and i appreciate the love and i will be checking out some of your work.

    quest ( ache el )
    greatmindsgreatworkgreatpeoplegreatpoetry
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    big ups

    all is well all good most welcome :toast: :D
     
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    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    quest

    Nice scribe.


    N2
     
  9. cocobutterskyn

    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Quest

    This is so nice and sweet. It left me with a smile. Thank you. :)


    Poetically Turn'd Out!
    CCBSKYN :heart: