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Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by MRS. LADY, Apr 26, 2008.

  1. MRS. LADY

    MRS. LADY Banned MEMBER

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    From the moment I felt you
    inside of me
    I was forever changed

    Prior to you
    Life was hell
    A human being who's heart was slain

    Each breath we took together
    As we are surly one
    I somehow knew you really chose me

    Even tho I call you son

    My reflection
    that's reflected
    right back at me

    A constant reminder of who
    I am

    Mother to you always
    All my power I give you
    To stand

    Each day I vow
    to make life better

    To ensure your bright tomorrow

    The gift I give you
    is a constious mind

    So you never feel the

    Sorrow

    This I beseech to
    the most high

    And ask you see me through

    Not just for my earthborn son
    I ask

    But all the children of all
    our people too!
     
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    Amen Sis Miss
    You are On Point
    Very Special
    And Beautiful to the TEE
    :love:
     
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    This was so heartfelt. Having a child, loving that chikl, changes you forever. Beautiful write.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    deep well felt harmony to the one within ........u scribed this well
     
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    re; hi

    good-afternoon Miss Lady,


    just thinking, and decided to check out a few poems...


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    Even tho I call you son

    My reflection
    that's reflected
    right back at me

    A constant reminder of who
    I am

    Mother to you always
    All my power I give you
    To stand

    ==
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    heart felt as no one can ever break the bond you have with thy son... maybe one day i shall be able to experience fatherhood, as it warms my heart knowing a queen like yourself is there for thy child, etc... literally molding him into a strong black man... in summary i indeed intaked thy poetic flow...


    have a nice day...

    sincerely,
    c.t.adams-///
     
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    Mamma Says

    it so well.... Miss Lady this is one of my favorites. I especially like how you refer to you son as having "chosen you". It feels good to be chosen!
     
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    Hi C.T. adams...

    I humbly thank you......

    bless ur heart... and I'm sure u and ur queen one day will have, hold and mold ..... the priceless gem of a prince or princess...

    much love and peace to you...

    hotep