Black Poetry : FOR RAVEN (NO ONE CAN HOLD ME DOWN)

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  1. turtle1

    turtle1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    LET ME FLY
    HIGH AS THE SKY
    LET MY WINGS FEEL THE AIR
    THERE IS NO BOUNDARIES
    I'M GOING EVERYWHERE

    HEY,

    LOOK AT ME
    I'M JUST AS FREE
    TOO HIGH TO TOUCH
    TOO FAST TO SLOW DOWN
    BEYOND THE STARS IN THE SKY
    I'M NOT COMING DOWN
    I'M HAVING FUN YOU SEE
    FLYING THROUGH TREES
    FLYING OVER LANDS AND SEAS
    NOT WORRIED ABOUT FALLING DOWN
    GOD'S HAND KEEP ME OFF THE GROUND
    AND LOOK AT MY WINGS
    THE WHITEST OF WHITE YOU'VE EVER SEEN.......

    A BEUTIFUL RAVEN OF WHITE WINGS
    YOU BEST BELIEVE IT'S NOT A DREAM
    SO DON'T PLAN TO HOLD ME BACK
    YOU KNOW HOW CRAZY THAT SOUND
    I'M GOING TO FLY FOREVER
    CAUSE NO ONE CAN HOLD ME DOWN!!!! :spinstar:
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  2. Bluewater

    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Peace and many blessing
    Blue:heart:
     
  3. the_story

    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this is beautiful my brotha, one love
    :heart:
    -story
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    just lovely tyte and real smoothly done
    very well written
     
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    very nice....
    the words just blended together
    with the sentiment....very nice
    one love
    khasm
     
  6. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wonderful scribe
    lovin it
    Peace
    Angel
     
  7. msluciousb

    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    OH THANK YOU SO MUCH THIS IS BEAUTIFUL!

    This was absolutely so captivating of who she is , I welcome and embrace your words of love, memorium and honor of her life...I have not given up my dear friends for I know that their is a Doctor who has all the answers knows the cure and can deliver...Trusting in that...I move forward and hope for the best and prepare for the worst..."For I shall forever go down from this place praising your name, should I not be delivered and my soul be required, it is well with my soul it is well!" But she is a fighter and is doing well all things considered, she lost her hair this week...Keep praying!
    AND AS ALWAYS...
    BLESSINGS ON YOUR HOUSE!
     
  8. Nita

    Nita Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    spoken with love

    Well said Turtle...
    I know she will enjoy
    One
     
  9. msluciousb

    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    WE NEED TO KEEP THIS TO THE FRONT!

    THANK YOU SO MUCH THOSE OF YOU WHO HAVE RESPONDED, IF YOU FEEL IN ANY WAY UNCONFORTABLE WITH THIS, YOU CAN ALWAYS WRITE AN INSPIRATIONAL PIECE THAT WILL UPLIFT HER WHILE THE FIGHT CONTINUES...

    *She has lost all of her hair after three treatments, she is back in the hospital
    with some complications and a fever...we hope and pray it's just a fever....!
    So continue to pray and write something anything..for my heart is to heavy
    to create, I find myself angry with God and am in a sad place...Pray for me
    as well...I yet love the Lord, but this I don't understand...you feeling me?
     
  10. turtle1

    turtle1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I WILL ALWAYS HAVE HER IN MY PRAYERS!!!!!!!
    PLEASE KEEP ME INFORMED.
    TELL HER THAT TURTLE LOVES HER!!!!!!!!!
     
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