Black Poetry : FOR ONCE

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  1. Lataisha Nicole

    Lataisha Nicole Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    For Once
    Just for once I’d like to meet a friend
    That was strong enough to be my man
    He’d take me by the hand
    And his eyes would scream how he understands
    That we both must survive this Babylonian land
    He’d never insinuate
    That he’d been through too much
    And now it was too late for him to try and trust
    He’d instead love me more
    Because of the lessons he has learned
    And he’d lay me down with that very love
    Expecting nothing in return
    Except love
    And it could never be too much
    And he’d be always thankful and grateful
    Never once thinking
    Not enough
    He would love me
    And not just the me you see
    But he’d massage the corners of my mind
    That sprouts up doubts and insecurities
    He’d nurture that place that’s afraid
    That there won’t be enough space or room
    For another heart break
    He’ll whisper softly that he knows of pain
    And that he will wait
    No matter how long it takes
    I’m speaking about a man that can relate
    To the invisible pains that pains us all
    He won’t beat me down
    Because they beat me down
    We’d dedicate our beings
    To helping one another stand tall
    He wouldn’t allow me to fall
    His words would keep me encouraged
    As his lips would heal the wounds
    Of me becoming a woman too soon
    And I will in turn give to him
    Not just the predictability of a snapper gem
    I would make him my world
    My father, king and lover
    Putting none but Jah above him
    Comparing his love to none other
    Together we will fly high
    He and I
    And a mile down the road he’d smell
    The curry and the scent of dumplings fried
    Everything I am inside
    In the palms of his hand will lay my laughs
    As I greet him at the door
    Wearing nothing at all
    Escorting him to a hot bath
    And it will be no such thing
    As a one way thing
    My girls will envy the diamonds in my eyes
    As my heart bling- blings
    And as we build
    We’ll do more than just make life and live
    People will began to question
    Could their thing be that real
    Because I’d be feeding him more than just nourishing meals
    We’d look at one another
    And know instantly, just how we feel
    A feeling so intense that when he’d touch me inside I would cry
    Without any real explanations why
    Except that when I’m inside his arms
    My reality bends and melts
    Until he and I are all that’s left
    And just for once
    I’d like to meet a friend
    That was strong enough
    To also be my man
    Lataisha Nicole
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    And for once a dream can come true
    of a strong black man to love just you
    one who will understand
    love you completely and take ya hand
    beyond thou eyez, but into ya soul
    what one see is a woman of gold
    pose i voice deep and strong
    never lable ya worth as wrong
    one that will feel da essence
    and give ya tender caressin
    from da heart thee will trust
    and see u way pass any lust
    upon you he will be loyal
    for in his heart ya be royal
    and together two will lay
    in a fashion of extreme play
    shower 2 shower bubble bath
    body & soul this will last
    in his arms he will forever hold
    and to his mind he will stroll
    inside ya mental of love
    and feel the depth when ya hug
    every kiss will send a wave
    of erotic bliss ya lips just gave
    he will treasure you
    like da morning sunrise
    and at wake up deep into ya eyes
    he will confess as yo man
    one that truely understand
    together there be a plan
    to make this out of a wonderland

    for i am that i am
    cometh upon thee
    and happily one will be

    This was well done i enjoyed the artistic flava and couldn't hold back!
     
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    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    like the way you express your feelings in your write flo on sis!
     
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    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    man

    i really really felt this sista brethren

    you can't get any realer than this

    this piece made me think

    and that's a good thing
     
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    Lloyd Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    It's really wonderful the way you express that thirst for being loved.a friend may be the best person since he's the one that knows most the real you.He's by your side when you need someone!He is with you when you want to share that joy.And then come the first kisses,innocent one at the beginning but full of passion just after!
    Hope you're going to find that friend!
    nice flow
    Lloyd
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    A friend that's strong enough to be your man...wow...I am co-signing this. Who better to be your man, than someone who loves you for you? Fabulous write!
     
  7. Lataisha Nicole

    Lataisha Nicole Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you for the love poets , we tend to as people, to meet someone and without taking the proper time needed to heal or love ourselves we jump into the next thing. I've found however that true love takes real time. The best of lovers began as friends. What better way to ensure a happy ending if it's beginning the right way. Love on poets, Love on!:flowers:
     
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    Lataisha Nicole Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you for the love poets , we tend to as people, to meet someone and without taking the proper time needed to heal or love ourselves we jump into the next thing. I've found however that true love takes real time. The best of lovers began as friends. What better way to ensure a happy ending if it's beginning the right way. Love on poets, Love on!:flowers:
     
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    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hello Lataisha

    Seeking a man willing and able to recognize a woman’s needs and she committed to do the same… I can get with that.
    With longevity being the reward time is a great investment.

    I enjoy your word art.


    feelin'itsouldeep!
    Coco:dance:
     
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