Black Poetry : ...For Old Times Sake...

[nevar]

flo on poetess....

 

[Clyde C Coger Jr]

In the Spirit of Sankofa!

triniti424,


Simply over the Top! And it is obvious, we, all, agree that this is a monumental piece, that should be copyrighted and shared, hopes this inspires you triniti424, unless you already have!

 

[triniti424]

Thank you family

So much I liked about this piece. You start off eloquently speaking of "island waterfalls", then dig in and give the brass knuckles feeling of loss:

And finally emotively and simply state that you love and miss him. Good to read you again poetess.

Thank you sister, Im honored it feels good to share again

WOW!

There she is!

BRAVO! BRAVO! BRAVO!

That's what i've been waiting for!

Excellent write Sister!

Awwww maaaaaaaaan lol My sister Purple always makin a sistah feel all lovvvvvvved and mushy and alllllllllll dat LOL Your kind of sisterly love is what makes sharing worth it Thank you

I love this flo Triniti

Oh no.. not a I-5 wreak...
There is so much.. that could be said

You shared how no one.. and with emphasis on " pretend "

" No sermon, no words, no man, no..thing...
nothing can make me “pretend”

That I’m okay " ​

You gave me some great advise recently
You said the strong keep going.
When gripped in this way
Survivors.. find a way to survive



It gets a little easier.
It never goes away.

So dance.

Memories
Can get in the way
Cloud the focus

Something a song or a place
Triggers and...
They kick open the closet
It is OK to dance
With the skeletons


Dance with the memories and
Put them away
When it isn’t convenient

Oh Hodee Bear You are so sincere I could just hug ya Thank you for always lending an ear

absolutely beautiful sis..........made me feel warm inside and had me looking around to see who I could cuddle up with!

Just like your scribe, I miss reading you

Thank you Brotha King your words are always a comfort

Wow! mixed with a little Fabulous! topped with a sprinkle of Genius!

THIS piece....I didn't know whether to cry or clap or both!

I just....miss you!!!!

Excellent! Excellent! Excellent! Excellent! EXCELLENT!!!!!

Sister LD LOL girl I was feelin BOTH when I wrote it ROFL so whateva you doin we doin TOGETHER LOL Thank you sister... Im so glad youre here it really makes this home complete

Awesome piece sis...all I can say is ...WOW!

Thank you sister Queen I always know that you will reach out to me irregardless

now u go gurl ....this was off da chain fo real .....missing and loving all in one

Thank you Sir Richne$$ From the poet-master himself a girl is honored

but overall

i'm not mad at cha

trying to establish yours





again

Brotha So'ja, I sure am trying Thank you for reading

"now...I’m a 5-car-pile-up-on-I-5-no-way-out-and-no-recuperation-no-regeneration...just a wreck"

that conjures up an ill picture right there...one that i have seen first hand...

"And the laughing-crying-fighting-talking-teasing-pleasing-sharing-caring is NOT something that I’ve easily forgot
And I dont know if I choose to...
Because if I do...
I lose apart of you
The part of me that will remain
Is the part from which i have nothing to gain"

this board missed ur poetic words sis...

one love
khasm

The first thing destee mae tole me last time I came into the chat... "Sisterrrrrr Brotha Khasm is stillll herreeeee" LOLLL

So thanks chi town brotha for your words of understanding Always appreciated

flo on poetess....

I sure will try sister Thank you

triniti424,


Simply over the Top! And it is obvious, we, all, agree that this is a monumental piece, that should be copyrighted and shared, hopes this inspires you triniti424, unless you already have!

Thank you brotha Clyde. I do try to copyright everything I do but really its more for my own sanities sake than it is for sharing lol A girl needs to stay anti-crazy Thank you so much for reading

 

[Clyde C Coger Jr]

In the Spirit of Sankofa!

triniti424,

Very welcome Sister, and thanks for your Friendship. Hope all stays well for you!

 

[1poetsought]

You ain't missed a thing, cause you still got that swing

shoe-bop-you-bop-dada-dada-WOW