Black Haiku : For My Masseuse

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by N2urSoul, Mar 9, 2002.

  1. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thumbs in, trace slow turns
    He is pressing on my spine
    Neglected muscles.

    My body opened
    Like a new moon, just unwind
    Relaxing massage.
     
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    You described it to a T...Ms. N You are simply amazing with words.
     
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    Nah sistah... that's you! You're the one whose amazing with words... I'm just scratchin' the surface with the "haiku thang".... :)

    Thanks for the read!! :)