Black Poetry : For My Mama (this don't even come close)

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  1. ShadeeLadee

    ShadeeLadee Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I read your words,
    but even before that
    you said the words

    it's been years, it didn't begin there
    and now I can't remember
    when I knew you'd always care

    no doubt, mama, I love the
    way you give the words
    but ain't nothing like the beauty
    coming from the way you live your words

    "thank you, mama" doesn't even say enough
    but my english ain't never been good
    and you're better at the mushy stuff

    but I know how love is supposed to go
    and I stopped by to tell you so


    SWT
     
  2. Destee

    Destee destee.com STAFF

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    Welcome ~ Welcome ~ Welcome

    :wave: :wave: :wave:

    Welcome ~ Welcome ~ Welcome

    this is such a sweet peace
    thank you ShadeeLadee
    for stopping by and telling us so
    matter of fact ...
    why dontcha just move on in
    and tell us every single day

    :heart:

    Destee
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    HOW SO SWEET

    A MOMA TOUCH
    SWEET WORDS
    TO CLUTCH
    IT'S BEAUTIFUL
    WELCOME WITHIN DESTEE PLAYGROUND
    FULL OF LOVE, PEACE & RESPECT...........
    :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave:
    WELCOME WELCOME WELCOME
    BE LOOKING TO READ MORE OF U :D
     
  4. alyce

    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Miss Ladee

    ....before I read the words, YOU said the words...
    (and after all the mushy stuff, a simple "thank you" is enough!)

    thank YOU for stopping by...look forward to seeing you again, soon! :heart:

    a
     
  5. T

    T Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    We are blessed

    when we have mama's who know how to show the way love is supposed to go.

    I love this sweet piece, Shadee. Don't be a stranger.

    aunt T
     
  6. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    some people

    don't appreciate their moms until it's to late but you showed her now

    Give praise
    nice piece SHA


    <DSS>
     
  7. LISTERSCRIBIN'

    LISTERSCRIBIN' Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    very nicely written. i agree with alyce...you said it. i'm lovin' it! lookin' forward to seein' mo from you.
     
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