Black Poetry : For My Gril

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by lpoet, Mar 21, 2002.

  1. lpoet

    lpoet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    *Ok since the last one i wrote wasent being felt i had to come off the top with something else*

    Metaphorically speaking
    Making love to you with my pen
    Deep inside I close my eyes
    As the words flow freely
    From mind to pen
    Yet again I find myself here
    Stirring up emotions I didn’t
    Even know lied within
    And I’d give my eyes to touch you
    Cause your figure so clearly etched
    In my mind that sometimes when
    I’m dreaming I wake up thinking you’re here
    And I put myself back to sleep by praying to
    God for forgiveness for the things
    I’ve done
    Thought of and
    Plan on doing to you
    In a world full of so many overrated pleasures
    And underrated treasures I’m so glad where
    Together and I know I’ll forever be deep
    In love with you
     
  2. j'hiah

    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    the last line was sicknin for the whole piece!!

    i dig it deep
    jh.
     
  3. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    LP.


    umm hmm! umm hmm! now dissss... dis heah is
    what i'm talkin' 'bout!! :D you know i getz high
    offa some Love ****!! & i am lovin' the way you
    did yo thang!! thank you for makin' my mornin'!

    :heart:
    Elayne.
     
  4. lpoet

    lpoet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks so much j'hiah for the response I hope "sicknin" is a good thang. GA_Sunshyne thanks like always i'm glad i could make your morning
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    the touch the love the depth ..... u pose a vision that got me
    clutching for the love bug!........
     
  6. halle24

    halle24 Active Member MEMBER

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    **** boy you amaze me. why you cant write me stuff like this. just playing. hows bri doing anyways. love ya
     
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    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    LP,

    This heah is tight and certainly a smooth free flow!!!

    :peace:
    GQ
     
  8. lpoet

    lpoet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks for all the replys everyone
     
  9. brotherman

    brotherman Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    what's behind the name "lonely poet"? I must inquire. Give me a little more time and I will peep some of your other joints.
     
  10. lpoet

    lpoet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    well i used to go by the name youngpoet but i think i'm a little to old for that now so i changed it. the reason for the lonely is cause i seem to write best about my hard times. you will find if you do go back and peep some of my past joints that i write alot of depressing type stuff. i usually wite that type of stuff cause it helps me get through my hard times.

    two of my favorite peices i posted in here were barren and searching for something.
    check um out and tell me what you think bout them
    holla back
     
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