Black Poetry : For My Girl

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Randee, Sep 12, 2003.

  1. Randee

    Randee Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Girl, whats wrong with you
    here's a real man, trying to be true
    to only you and your daughter
    wants to bath you in rose water
    wants to make you his queen
    wants to spend mad green
    treat you like you've deserved for so long
    and you act like you know no difference between right and wrong
    bought you 6 carats, no bull****
    why you acting like you chicken****
    you out there mackin' dishonestly
    while he remind you of his love constantly
    put you up in his penthouse
    trying to make you a loving spouse
    be a father to your beautiful little Monet
    and you'd rather be out there running stray.
    Crazy ***** . . . this is what we talked about since birth
    white dresses, big houses and someone who knows your worth
    I wish you were close enough to slap
    somone needs to remind you this is not B.A.P.S.
    you aren't gonna be able to string him along
    with some silly dance and song
    explain to him you were so wrong
    and tell him, like I know, how you are scared
    how forever noone has cared to share
    their life with you, no strings attached
    how this isn't a mistake, no mismatch.
    I know you love him, I can see it in your eyes
    so, please girl, don't **** it up by telling him ****** up lies
    I know all of this sounds rough
    but to be honest someone needs to be tough
    sick of you getting everything you want
    acting oh so nonchalant
    This is no time to play
    In one month its supposed to be your wedding day.
     
  2. true love

    true love Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    so realistic...i understand where you're coming from completely.
     
  3. triniti424

    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    she betta wise up! shoo its a good thang she got you to tell her :)
     
  4. Randee

    Randee Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Want to kill her sometimes. Realistic because we all have a friend who doesn't know what she is throwing away until shes on our couches crying "Why he left me?"
     
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    I know thas right meanwhile you're thinkin "why u cryin he didnt LEAVE you, you PUSHED him away"
     
  6. Randee

    Randee Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Girl, you know you RIGHT now. LOL. Meanwhile, I sit alone writing her poetry. what's wrong with me LOL again
     
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    this was straight randee...sometimes they need the wake up call

    got a diamond sitting right there...and fail the realize it

    this was on point!
     
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    feeling you on this
    honest vibes
    very tight
    Peace
     
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