Black Poetry : For My Diamond

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by mrravenelli, Feb 7, 2003.

  1. mrravenelli

    mrravenelli New Member MEMBER

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    Looking east to west, Atlantic in full view;
    there's something majestic about staring out at the ocean--magnified by being here with you.

    Mid-summer in Jersey, produces very nice weather,
    assists to cherish quality time we spend together.

    Travelling on beige sprinkles of sand,
    laughing, reminiscing, holdind hands.
    Never forgot how our journey had begun,
    with the desire to spend our lives as one.
    Feelings for you developed a few years ago;
    since then, dreaming of sharing my life with you,
    coincidentially; about me you had the same dream too.
    We love each other in ways, others will never know.

    A foot from where ocean encroaches upon land,
    my heart dispatched a signal to hand.
    "Emanuel loves Rita", written with my fourth finger,
    salty seawater's tide submerged my message---the words now faintly linger.

    Previous search for happiness, offered so much hope---had much to gain,
    my search has ended, the love I've found---will forever remain.
     
  2. Bishop

    Bishop Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I think he's just in the wrong place....
     
  3. Destee

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    mrravenelli ... i think you posted this in the wrong forum ... i'm moving it to the poetry forum for you ... nice work and welcome ... :)

    :heart:

    Destee
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    welcome welcome welcome !!!!

    welcome to destee's poetic playground of love
    remain in da depth of foreverness!! nice vibe poet!:wave: :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave:
     
  5. poeticdelight

    poeticdelight Member MEMBER

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    your use of imagery is off the chain

    welcome :wave:

    keep writing

    one

    pd

    :toast:
     
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