Black Poetry : For my dear friend

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  1. asimplepoet

    asimplepoet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I wish I could paint all your tomorrows bright
    And with one stroke make everything alright
    But your ultimate destiny is beyond my control
    And all I can offer is to be the hand you hold
    You'll never glance back & see only 1 set of footsteps
    For with you I promise to tranverse the valley depths
    And go the entire distance and even that extra mile
    Just to see you make it through this trial and smile
    So when I say I am your friend I redefine the word
    For this bond we have is made to last like a ford
    Sometimes it is scary to know how much I really care
    But I pour all of me into this union cause for you i dare
    I dare to give my all to someone and really be there
    For the joy of you makes me love being right here
    Right here by you side through thick and thin
    And together i know that you and I shall win​
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    To have a friend who will go through that last mile with you, if need be, now that is a true friend. Your words truly warmed my heart, and your friend is truly blessed to have you.
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Back for more luv...
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    friendship & love one and the same for u my heart claim
    to give my all undefind and true as we journey like glue
    keep a smile made for miles and sweep away any blue
    because friendship is all about you ......beautifully done
     
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    asimplepoet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks

    thanks you guys for the luv
     
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    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    UM

    FEELING THIS ONE TOO.

    MAN GREAT WORK POWER AND LOVE HERE

    AND COMMITMENT

    peace
     
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    PLATINUMILLITY1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Time and Time Again

    It is inevitable for you to have melancholy rythm
    Never a dull moment
    You have the Flavor
    and I LOVE reading your Flow.....
    Beautiful
    SISTER a simple poet
    (smh.....I know....Finally right?;))
    Much peace to you
    Flow on:)
     
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