Black Poetry : For My Creativity

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  1. jus_dat_nice

    jus_dat_nice Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Creativity stems from pain
    Tears of heartbreak stains the canvas
    Painting stories of startling imagery
    So vivid that your own heart cries crimison tears
    Powerful stanzas thunder out of the dark cloud that hangs above my head
    Torment whispers in my soul
    Shreading my peace of mind until I release a piece of me
    Slit open my mind and pour my spirit onto the page
    Until I lie drained, unmoving
    I remain unmoved by the joy of simplicity
    Masochistic tendencies hinder me from unforrowing my brow
    My neck remained premanently bent
    Cracked lips pressed into my pen
    Muttering mantras of misery
    Moaning my most scared thoughts and desires
    Spiral notebooks document every spiral into depressino
    Scribbled seances to draw away dark spirits
    Glaring at me with haunted eyes
    Holding back the pleasure that doesn't bode well for the bard in me
    Suicidal talent
    I kill myself to fulfill my destiny
    For my creativity
     
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    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I love "For My Creativity", and especially like the way that you raise the level of play.

    Our craft ain't no joke. PEACE.
     
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    This is really good! It has a soft rhythmic flow that reminds me a little of how I write. :) I can almost hear your voice in this and I love that
     
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