Black Poetry : For ladies.. actually men can really relate!

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by dreadpoet, Jan 9, 2002.

  1. dreadpoet

    dreadpoet Member MEMBER

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    Do i know you...
    seriously, do i know U?
    I feel i need to let you know,
    that a look once warm.. now gleams as empty as glass and cold as snow.

    I strive to avoid all confrontation with your namesake...

    Dirty Harriet with hair trigger emotion.
    Witch of the west, with anger and frustration within your bubling cauldron.
    No wrath ....
    like....
    your other self with precieved opposition in its path.
    Sis, i dont wanna fight!!

    As your flag waves the fury of red...
    mine gently waves the white of submission and fear fed.

    Do i know U..?
    Perhaps in about four or five days,
    whenU are released and seperated from your blinding haze
    of frenzied emotion..
    turmoil..
    commotion..
    devoted to stand for pain`s devotion.

    I will go to the store for you...r "always"...
    i know with the wings ...

    happy cycle day LOL
     
  2. eternal

    eternal Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    lol lol lol
    Whoa, is it like that??!!
    Sounds like a bad experience ta me!
    Peace
    E
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    HUMMM!!

    WEAVING THROUGH THOUGHTS BUT I FEEL YA ....
     
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    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Dread.


    ummm... LOL... well... no comment! :lol:

    but thanks for the laugh dear poet!!

    happy cycle day to you too... &
    welcome to the fam!!

    Peace.
    SunShyne~
     
  5. MapleXtract

    MapleXtract Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    lol, lol, lol...

    Oh my goodness!!!
    If this ain't the best
    'ode to pms' I've ever
    read...
    I'm crackin' up over here.
    Anybody that can throw
    a 'period' smack dab in the
    middle of a stanza, is
    extremely talented...
     
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    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    dreadpoet

    :wave: :wave: Welcome :wave: :wave:


    :lol: definitely a poem for the ages.... and yes, I too can relate (all to well) :lol:


    Unique topic!

    Keep scribin' .... and welcome to this house!
     
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