Black Poetry : For Kemet

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Wildseed, Nov 15, 2002.

  1. Wildseed

    Wildseed Active Member MEMBER

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    Laid eyes on you
    Wanted to smell your skin
    Frakencense and myrrh
    You and her
    hangin round me
    But it would be wrong wouldn’t it?
    Read what you said in
    Unheard words
    The adjectives you revealed
    Stirred me, my curiosity
    that glance made my heart dance
    And my mind wonder what kind of
    Life your lips would breathe into me
    Hmmm.
    But it would be wrong wouldn’t it?

    Just me and you restin’ in your
    Unfinished nest and how beautiful
    I would be in between your tan sheets.
    How beautiful.
    It would be wrong wouldn’t it?
    I look forward to the time
    When our minds would twist
    Together in divine offering
    And the worst part is circumstance,
    doesn’t stand a chance,
    At least
    not against me.

    So lean against me
    Open slightly, smile widely
    to see
    and I will
    Always be
    Truly you friend
    So let this begin with kind words
    And holding hands.
    No promises of what the future brings
    Just something
    To turn the race of chaotic
    Into slow sanguine walks in orange
    Summer sunsets.
    Melodic laughter
    and utter relaxation
    Just enough to facilitate
    Blessed daily vacations
    :toast:
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    ya vibe is on hit ! nice work
     
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    This was nicely down. The words do a slow waltz, as if trying to suspend this particular piece in time. Feeling the love in this piece!
     
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    This is so beautiful WildSeed ... and you know what it means, right?

    At the Family Reunion you will only be stabbed 99 times because you disagreed with him, but, you wrote this beautiful peace just for him ... while on the other hand ... Thandiwe who has not written him beautiful poetry but had the nerve to disagree will be stabbed 500 thousand times ... hehehe ... Even though I too have disagreed with him, I will not be stabbed once. I learned the secret, disagree with a fresh baked sweet potato pie in hand and all will be well! :)

    Nawwww I'm just teasing ... this is sweet.

    :heart:

    Destee
     
  5. Wildseed

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    CHEESE :D

    :love:
    I feel the love. Destee, i like your style and that crap is funny. I can run so he might get me maybe fifty and nick me maybe ten. ahahahahah
    Rich you keep coming back for more. I like that.
     
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    yeap!! can't get enough!!
     
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    It's all love Kem, ahahahahahh
     
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    shaz Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nice flow
     
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    wildflower7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this flow was soothing...
    i guess i'm not the only wild one anymore :crying:...
    welcome! -7 :spinstar:
     
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    WildSeed ... did he say "date" gurl ???!! :eeek:

    be sure to wear your running shoes is all i gotta say 'bout that!

    :)

    Destee
     
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