Quiet Poetry Lounge : For James

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by blaquebutterfli, Aug 1, 2003.

  1. blaquebutterfli

    blaquebutterfli Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    screaming cause I forget
    the sound of my voice
    blinded by the thought
    of
    one
    more
    day
    here I am not
    what I thought I should be

    ten miles away
    from a future
    battered, broken, blistered
    still
    one
    step
    ahead
    of remembering why
    I live where you chose to die
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    wow! very heart felt and well posed
    ya skillz is awesomeeeeeeeeee!!!!!!!
     
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    Alizentang Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I agree your skillz on this piece really shown through.

    Much Love
    :heart:Alize:heart:
     
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