Black Poetry : For Jah....Poetic Heaven

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by MORE, Jun 16, 2003.

  1. MORE

    MORE Banned MEMBER

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    i never knew you
    only thru your words
    deep, prophetic, magnetic
    pronouns, adjectives and verbs.

    Like so many soldiers
    that have come before your time
    you've now taken a journey
    free from pain and rain
    and time...

    we truly feel your loss
    only in the physical tho
    cause you are a thread
    in each poet
    that flows and flows

    all the time you've taken
    to make your life seem right
    in a moment was savagely stolen
    by a bullet flown in the night.

    But we harden not the heart
    even when tears can't conceal
    the loss of another brother
    the circle of life seems unreal.

    in a way we should envy
    that youve taken another step
    a higher calling and destination
    another mission in your steps.

    surely here you have completed
    all phases one thru seven
    save a tambourine for me brotha
    see u in Poetic Heaven.....

    rip...
     
  2. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    tyte and heartfelt scribe...
     
  3. Destee

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    beautiful Sister MORE ... thank you for this

    :heart:

    Destee
     
  4. NADIA*BINTA

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    so heartfelt... very beautiful flow...

    peace
     
  5. angelicsage

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    This was a heartfelt dedication.
     
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    Very nice MORE...:heart:felt
     
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    loved it .....u expressed it so well ...
     
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    I must agree with the majority. Very heartfelt. And the little dancing dude is so cute.
     
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    Captain, O' Captain

    Go in peace, O' Captain,
    For you have wrought the ship.

    1poetsought ~ :toast:
     
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    blessins on you for writing this beautiful piece you said it so well
     
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