Black Haiku : FOR JACQUEDOLYN

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  1. Akilah

    Akilah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I SHOULD just rejoice…
    God sent for His dear angel
    And called her back home

    So hard to rejoice…
    I know it’s so damned selfish
    But I want her HERE

    How can I rejoice ???!!!
    It makes me sick with anger
    Much too young to die

    God…Help me rejoice…
    She’s in such a better place
    Yet, I’m still mourning



    ~ Akilah Aug 2005 ~
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    this one that can't be touched
    well expressed and done in tribute
    of JACQUEDOLYN......................
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I have to agree with Rich. If I had the pleasure of knowing her, I could add to it, but I did not. Wonderful tribute, and yes, it is so difficult to let go.
     
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    i also agree...
    this was your talk with God bout
    Jacquedolyn...peace..