Black Poetry : For Ish*

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by ladybug, Jan 12, 2004.

  1. ladybug

    ladybug Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Remembrance of when
    Love was misguided
    Lives were taken
    My innocence being stolen

    All of these things I knew to well last night,

    Memories of tales untold
    Were only recognized by pains of yours

    My heart hurt for you, last night…

    Could not have lessened what some call growing pains
    But who would of known to take that cliché so literal…

    Last night he recalled all to well

    Tales were told
    Hurt was shared
    Comfort found

    Last night tales were told

    And I never had to say a word.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    dis was tyte flowing i hear ya feel ya and the tales
    flow on poet
     
  3. ladybug

    ladybug Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you. This was for a friend that was in need of some cheering up so i wrote this for him. glad you enjoyed it.
     
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    Very beautiful flow, and I love the way it's written. Much love to you.
     
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    ladybug Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks for all the love.
     
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    Felt the emotions here, flow on.