Black Poetry : For GA Sunshyne...

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Danilyn, Mar 11, 2002.

  1. Danilyn

    Danilyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This is the time when the flower in your heart dies
    when the water isn’t enough to sustain its bloom
    and the meadow has lost it’s fertility…
    This is the moment when your joy fades,
    when the day is packed with the memory of what was
    and what used to be,
    making you crazy with the questions of what might have been.
    This is the hour when your tears let loose
    like an ocean tide
    when your face becomes lost behind the streams of misfortune
    and when your eyes become dark pools of melancholy solitude
    This is the minute when your burden gets heavy
    too heavy to bear
    and there seems to be no “riverside” by which to lay them down.
    April is coming soon, dear friend…
    The memories of yesterday shall continue to fade into the background
    With each sunrise, a new beginning has dawned
    and a new friend is waiting to hold your hand
    waiting to tell you you’re special
    waiting to water that flower in your heart…

    Hope you know what I'm talkin about! Love ya sis!

     
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    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Dani.


    ...how could i ever have thought of disowning you? :)

    when i saw this thread... i didn't know what to think.
    but as i read it, it became clear to me that you indeed
    were listening... not only with your ears, but with your
    heart & i thank you, irreversib-ly for that! my mama
    told me recent-ly to learn to let people in... & i'm oh-so
    glad that i did with you! you have turned out to be
    truly special to me. i know we always joke that we
    must have been sisters in a past-life... & even if we
    weren't... we definite-ly are now. not by blood... but
    AlwaysAlways by Love.

    :heart:i love you lil sister of mine!
    Elayne
     
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    THIS RIGHT HERE WAS ILL IT DIDN'T RHYME BUT IT FLOWED SOMHOW HIT THAT GA GIRL BLIND SIDE ENJOY THE READ KEEP REPPING THIS GIRL
     
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    This is peace...

    Thank you Sista Danilyn... though you meant this for the beautiful Ms. Shyne, there are other hearts being touched by your words. That's how it be like....

    :heart:

    a
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    SO WARM AND BEAUTIFUL IT JUST CAPTURES DA HEART
     
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    Yes indeed,

    This is heart felt. GA has a wonderful friend in you. May you continue to touch her heart with your poetry.

    Yo sista in poetry...Joyce
     
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    Danilyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Elayne...
    Yes maam! I was listening. This really hit me after we talked, and I thought it might brighten your day. Glad you decided not to disown me. Even though I am terrible about keepin up, u know I'm always here, right?
     
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    Danilyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Maddrapper...

    Thanx for droppin by. Sorry it didn't rhyme. Most of my peaces don't. A lot of times, I find myself forsaking content for the purpose of rhyming, and I miss the point I was trying to make. Glad you liked.
     
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    Danilyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Alyce...

    My girl!!! Yes, it was intended for Sunshyne, but also for anyone who may be going through anything. There's a friend somewhere waiting to help them get through. I'm so glad you stopped by. I ain't complete lest you do! Love ya.
     
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    Danilyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Rich...
    Is your heart really captured? That's so sweet. You have the kindest heart ever! U know how I feel bout cha!
     
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