Black Poetry : For every breath, I will die a death

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by angelicsage, Oct 13, 2003.

  1. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    well now

    dis was awesome flowin and tyte
    lovin it
     
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    wow...sage, when you flow, you p-r-i-c-k the emotions right to the bone my sista:)
     
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    oh my girl, I have never heard this brand of pain expressed with such artistry and class. this is just a beautiful piece of work.
     
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    This is painfully powerful...I had reoccuring chills up and down my spine
    wishing i did not understand
    and hoping you werent feeling the pain that i had once felt
    where you all but sacrifice your living life
    trying
    and hoping
    and coping
    but in vain...hopefully not for you my sista
    and yet...sending my prayers of compassion and sisterly healing to my soul sista :grouphug:
    you know who u can call :heart:
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    oh my like this...tight
     
  7. true love

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    very deep...much love to you
     
  8. poeticlyspeakin

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    I have to agree with everyone else... like i told u b4, i wish i knew how to describe things like u do.
     
  9. LovelyGoldenOne

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    deep....i can relate more than u know...
     
  10. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Rich…”the tone of your {well now} says a million words…”
    Thank you for each of them.


    Swt-T…I’m pricking your emotions and you’ve been pricking
    My imagination with them flows you’ve been droppin lately…Thanks!


    Gempis…If I could give you a hug I would…I feel like I’m out on the
    Court or the field and there you are…yelling and doing backflips and
    Cartwheels………and hey…got me feeling so good…I miss the ball…
    And get trampled…….LOL….”What I’m saying is, I truly appreciate
    The love and support you show to my work and I wanted to tell you.
    Much luv to you!



    Triniti….My sister…you know my heart,
    This is a piece from my new series…it’s called
    The Mourning Series…He was my sunshine….
    Girl, I can’t help it, I’m an artist…gotta get it out
    Of my system…then hopefully I can get over but it
    Doesn’t feel like it…as you can see in my piece.
    But hey, I got your number…and I will use it. :heart:



    Mzblkangel…I know you can relate, always doing the love thang!


    True love…it makes me feel good to just see you on my page…Much luv to you!


    Poeticlyspeakin…I’m listening…and I know you told me before…just speaking the
    Sentiments of my soul…she’s the one that’s deep, not me…and when she’s wading
    In that thing we call emotion…it’s hard to tell what she’ll say….Much luv to u girl!


    Lovely….I know from your flows that you feel me. Thanks for that!
     
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