Black Poetry : For Eric.....

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by MORE, Jul 8, 2003.

  1. MORE

    MORE Banned MEMBER

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    called u 100 times today
    haven't heard back from u
    either way
    guess u still trippin over
    what ur friend said

    was falling deep and u know
    we had that sunshine glow
    but u can't let go of your ego
    my love is real
    not just for show

    got a kick cause i liked u so much
    u went out of town didn't stay in touch
    but when u come back what u will find
    is a girl who has changed her mind

    done all i could to show u that
    no matter what i got ur back
    what u gonna do when u finally see
    u can't find me, u can't find me

    done all i could to be the one
    loyal to the end, ask and it's done
    what u gonna do when u finally see
    u can't find me, u can't find me

    inside i used to feel so sick
    got used to you then u up and went
    laffed at my heart and my soul
    laffed because i could not let go

    i know i looked kinda crazy
    cause i wanted so bad for this to be
    but obviously your love was to weak
    to sustain all inside of me.......

    but darkness only last for a time
    u were in my heart and in my mind
    but i can't compete with ur silly ways
    don't wanna go, but i cannot stay
     
  2. HODEE

    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    MORE.. you know the fellows.

    Your putting down some serious eye openers, for those who don't know.

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    All thats needed is someone to have your back. To stick when things get thin. Working on that thick track. Run away, is what they do. Not to close. I can't do anything my friends can see. Not understanding the complex. Commit no not me.

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    I would like to do a compilation with you. You pick the subject. Hit me up anytime.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    well felt and posed of great inner feelings
    say it as u may !
     
  4. SwtT

    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Say it MORE.......tyte flow :)
     
  5. Alizentang

    Alizentang Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I like this so much that Im gonna have to go in the Archives and find MORE of you. :)
     
  6. the_story

    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this is a very tyte flow very nice indead
     
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