Black Poetry : ~For Endearment La, La, La~

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  1. Mind~$oul

    Mind~$oul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Keystyle...

    the break of
    day...
    made it's way
    across my sticken
    brown face...

    da*n, it's still the same...

    life is beginnin
    to turn her back
    on me...
    i've turned mines years ago
    ignoring her plea...ungrateful b****

    be bop-bop bop-bop bop BOW!

    it's a shame when a man
    forgets how to smile...
    my mask is an
    awful grimace...and under that
    my facial expression is even
    more hideous(revolting)...
    ...........dare to search for
    ..............................endearment?

    la--la--la te---te---ta POW!

    i've been waiting for you
    to take hold of
    my hand...
    with your divine power, i beg
    of you to mold me into
    a man...
    i was born
    one being...but
    selfishly lived the life
    of another...
    and when the day
    was over...
    i still couldnt find the strenght
    to look in
    the mirror...
    cause i was afraid of
    terror...

    naw
    i was afraid a
    rejected soul...would
    come forth and
    scream "behold!"...
    and force me to look at the
    person, the real me
    who i left in the
    cold...

    I wanna be real

    the only thing i'm
    left with
    is...
    hope, sooner or later that too
    leaves me
    hopeless...

    may i borrow
    some hope please?
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    whoaaaaaaaaaaaaa!!!
    dis was deep....hear ya
     
  3. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    emotional flow...
     
  4. MzBlkAngel

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    oh i like nice flow
     
  5. gempis

    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This is mad deep, very heart felt. Big big props for this piece.
     
  6. Mind~$oul

    Mind~$oul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks for the love
     
  7. Khasm13

    Khasm13 STAFF STAFF

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    dude...you ripped dis one...
    i felt this here
    it's been times where i did not want to look
    in da mirror too...
    good one
    peace
    khasm
     
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