Black Poetry : For Brother MONETARY'S BIRTHDAY.... A poetic gift

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  1. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    In light of your birth…

    I pause to reflect
    The astonishment felt
    As your resplendent eyes of Israel
    Stare back at me
    Dark pools of liquid onyx
    Pulling me through…the window of your soul
    As I stumble down the corridor of your heaven
    With hands against the walls
    I attempt to get my bearings
    As I hear your first cry
    Feel your first step
    Watch you grow
    Observe the lessons of your youth
    Taste your tears
    Sense your fears
    And embrace your pain
    With the deepest of empathy

    ….I even smile and laugh inside your joy

    And I am compelled to convey
    Just how special…this day
    Is for me…
    More near and dear to my heart
    Than anyone you know…
    So…my prayer and wish for you
    Is not the typical “Happy Birthday”
    It is one of proverbial blessings and prose

    So…Upon your head
    I place the halo of the moon, as your crown
    And inside your palms
    I place the intensity of the sun
    One hand holding the scepter of a comet
    And the other…possessing healing for our people
    Upon your chest, I place…the hand of GOD
    To guard your heart and soul like armor
    I shod your feet with the preparation of the gospel
    Placing a cloak of love upon your shoulders
    And for your lips…I place a single kiss
    And
    …the sweetest song ever chorused of angels ~ Inside your ears
    I…
    command thunder and lightning to inhabit your voice
    And fire…to flow through your hair
    For these things…
    Are each solely deserving of a heavenly being
    For you are
    ………a beacon of light

    Knowing you and loving you…
    Affirms to me daily…
    That GOD…still performs miracles
    And I find my faith renewed
    When I look upon you
    Touch you
    Breathe with you
    And allow my heart to beat freely
    In sync…with yours too

    My Confidant & Friend
    Magnificent Soul & Midnight Jones
    The Sexiest Libra I know…
    My Companion and Guardian Angel…

    These things and more…evoke my gratitude to the Lord.
    May you be blessed to celebrate many, many more…

    XOXOXOXOXO
    Sage



    Copyright, Alh 2005
     
  2. Bluewater

    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This Is Beautiful

    HI Sista ((((Sage))))
    Missing you :)
    This a a beautiful poeti Birthday Born Poem
    and yes i know he will enjoy it
    As your resplendent eyes of Israel
    Stare back at me
    Dark pools of liquid onyx
    Pulling me through…the window of your soul

    I was just captivated as i read on.
    Indeed this is a wonderful gift for a King..
    Much Love to you sis
    HAPPY B-DAY MONEY..LOL..I only know one emotion...:) I got a find my list QQ

    Peace
     
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    Very Nice poetic gift :luvv: Angelicsage



    Happy Birthday Monetary

    :birthday: :birthday:
     
  4. Monetary

    Monetary going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    Angelic Sage...

    My Dear Friend,

    I thank you for the poem. I really do. I honestly don't know what to say for I am in awe of your gift. It's beautiful.

    You are truly a master of the written word...and they say I have the gift to gab. I see that you possess that same gift and you wield it so well.

    You too are special to me. I will cherish our friendship forever.

    Thank you again.

    Much Love.

    :kiss:

    :heart:

    :grouphug:
     
  5. Monetary

    Monetary going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    Bluewater and Hodee....THANK YOU. :D

    Bluewater :grouphug:

    Hodee...dapz, Black man. :toast:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    this was sweet and outstanding sista for a worthy brutha
     
  7. watzinaname

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    Wow sage, when you give a poetic gift, you don't play. This would touch anyone beyond belief, as your words simply light up the screen.
    And Money, even though it's a couple days early, Happy Birthday brotha!! :)
     
  8. caramelpython

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    :bday: :bday: :bday: :bday: :bday: :bday: :bday: :bday: :bday: :bday: :bday: Happy B-Day Bro I know I wont be around either so enjoy your day and give the weekend HELL :toast:
     
  9. Monetary

    Monetary going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    Thank you, Watz :kiss: and Python :toast:
     
  10. sonnee01

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    Hey Money..

    Happy Birthday...I hope you have a GREAT time on your day.....you deserve it...
     
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