Black Poetry : (For Baller's "Somber Moment") Something Wicked This Way Comes

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  1. cherryblossom

    cherryblossom Banned MEMBER

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    An attitude~~~blue hued

    A heart stripped of fleshly cover~~~pulsing nude

    A mind with dark thoughts imbued

    Terrorized~~~Demon pursued

    By anger, spite, and despair~~~Evilly wooed

    A daily, internal, slashing/clashing feud

    With hate, envy, and melancholy infused

    Chafing, Choking, and Crippling
    Sent to kill or, at least,
    Maim...

    Misery
    Is its name.
     
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    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    interesting...

    (a little something off da top)

    hither window flutters down​

    opening unto a midday's sound​

    uncovering this flesh-stripped, fabled beast​

    that one day finds me, cold ... deceased​

    and, hence, it was that quiet storm​

    that, in its wake, left me unborn​

    that all might know the depths of me​

    it left me ~ ravished​

    by misery​
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    awesome piece very interesting flowz
     
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    Great expressions of the monster misery, that we all should refuse to keep company. You two do somber well!


    MaddSistahlyLove!
    Coco:heart:
     
  6. cherryblossom

    cherryblossom Banned MEMBER

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    Thank you much, Brother Rich.


    And you too, Sister Coco!


    Who knew "somber" could feel so GOOD?! :D
     
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    Somber indeed, if misery's description is that horrific...
    I wants no part of it...as always, Cherry. Your words give
    credence to thought.


    I'm likin that CherryB & Baller vibe....:toast:


    nice response, Baller


    epiphany:heart:
     
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