Black Poetry : For Avid Readers and Book Lovers, Everywhere

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  1. alyce

    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    girlfriend say
    she BELONGS in your book
    in chapters dedicated
    and designated
    to/for her

    could be a whole volume!

    I mean, ****!
    she wrote herself in
    insinuated her life story
    intertwined her verses
    with yours

    she didn't even have
    the decency to use
    pencil!

    I think she knew
    there would be no
    erasing her

    your pages are
    riddled with the torrid
    strokes of her red ink

    my brutha,
    your sentence has been
    extended...

    she's deleted all the
    question marks...

    & there are so many places where
    she's inserted her paragraphs,
    added her commas, capitalized her
    self wherever the subject is
    U...

    ...and she's added
    lines and widened margins
    to flesh out the
    quiet soliloquies
    born of her skin, and
    the direct quotes
    pouring from her heart...

    oh yeah,
    sista girl been
    re-writing
    your book,

    editing
    whole pages,
    striking/
    adding phrases/punctuation
    for
    depth & content ~

    tampering with
    the spell-ation...

    enlarging the font

    just re-WORKIN your book!

    the way you've
    undoubtedly
    been re-writing
    hers

    alyce, 2001
     
  2. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    My sista

    Alyce, Alyce, Alyce --

    This is truly the BOMB!
    I love the way this is speakin'
    fluently over the page ~

    Lovin' errythang you mass produce!!
     
  3. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Ms A....

    have i told you lately that you be da bomb?

    well let me take this opportunity to just say:

    You Be Da Bomb Baybee! & that is truly
    undisputed! :) thank you for sharin' your brilliance!

    Peace.
    SunShyne~
     
  4. baller

    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    FUNNY...

    ...how things like that can go on and on without notice.
    before you know, your boys be talkin' 'bout how you be WHIPPED and ****...and how they don't recognize you no mo' coz you be act'n like some stranger from the burbs. like you can't handle yo' bizniz no mo.

    sorry to see it, yo.

    {unless it's all for your good.:)}

    peace&muchlove.
     
  5. Destee

    Destee destee.com STAFF

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    tyte Sis ... tyte ta def !!!

    :heart:

    Destee
     
  6. alyce

    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    hey you all!

    thanks for reading me! :D


    a
     
  7. Hunter

    Hunter Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sista Gurl...

    You already know how I feel about this schtuff

    *non-fiction*

    :love:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    ALYCE

    GURL U WRITE DEM WORDS HEA!

    LAY IT DOWN TO CANVAS AND REWRITE
    THE WHOLE STORY I LOVE THE WAY THIS READ
    AND HOW IT POSE THE TRUTH........THANKZ.;)
     
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