Black Poetry : For All

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by monad.poetress, Jun 2, 2004.

  1. monad.poetress

    monad.poetress Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    By Monad.poetress


    For all the bad in me
    I see the good in you
    For all the pain I had
    You helped to bring me through
    For all the tears I shed
    You helped to ease the pain
    For all the stormy nights
    You brought me out the rain
    For all the rage I have and all the hate I hold
    For all the times I shivered
    You covered me from the cold
    For all the smiles I never had
    You made me smile again
    For all the loneliness that I endured
    You were my only friend
    For all the venom that poisoned me
    You extracted it from my mind
    For all my crooked errors
    You straightened out the lines
    For all my bad
    You see my good
    For all my tears
    You make them joy
    For all I am
    You helped me to be
     
  2. rasheed

    rasheed Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    monad.poetress,
    Nice write and what a blessing, every(good)body deserves this......
    Unfortunately sometimes good people get messed around.....
    Congratualations on the write and the relationship if its a real one and even the understanding if that's what the write is about...

    Peace and Blessings
     
  3. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    indeed this was a sweet release and well felt to the
    hearts of good and warmth of souls so worthy
    tyte flow
     
  4. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sounds like a description of a good friend to me, warmly written and received, flow on.
     
  5. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Touching scribe sister...

    Very nice...
     
  6. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    very good relase
    very touching and
    i enjoyed this read
    Peace
    Angel