Black Poetry : for all the poets

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by belahni, Apr 22, 2001.

  1. belahni

    belahni Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i've been watching
    and waiting and praying
    for a sign
    that your words
    were for me

    silly

    you don't even know me
    don't know that i exist

    but i always feel
    your words

    and consider
    myself

    kissed

    b

    ~been reading a long time, sometimes we get caught up in the words and our need to be the 'subject'....but they're words written in another time, from another frame of mind,
    but they bless, no less!

    keep scribing poets!
     
  2. LISTERSCRIBIN'

    LISTERSCRIBIN' Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    you know i'm with you on that. it's quite nyce.
     
  3. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Feelin' all of ya ...

    thanks for scribin' this piece...
    it's celestial!!
     
  4. Hunter

    Hunter Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    little "b"

    I know you heard me talking today!!

    This is the place where I come to pray
    So I hope my fellow poets feel me
    When I say that it is the intensity
    Of the verses that summon me to the altar
    Not the image of me that I am hoping to see
    Basking in the rays of flowz....

    *amen*
     
  5. Destee

    Destee destee.com STAFF

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    oooohhhhhh Belahni !!!

    i have gotten into trouble
    more than a few times
    thinking a poet's flow was for me

    hehehehe

    and you know what ???
    i think it is for us!

    :heart:

    Destee
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    HEY NOW1

    B LET YA MIND BE FREE
    ALLOW YA SOUL TO HOLD ONE'S VIBE
    LET YA HEART NOT HIDE INSIDE
    SEE THE POETRY POETIC JUSTICE
    JUST 4 U .......YEAH! THAT TRUE
    AND MAY I ADD MY LOVE 4 U TOO
    THANK U 4 DES ONE ..............IN FLIGHT>>
     
  7. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    B....

    i can dig it!!... (lol)

    the way i see it... if you don't get a personal
    email or shout out from da poet...

    ...the piece ain't for you! :lol:

    NothinButLove...
    Sunshyne~
     
  8. blakverb

    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Belahni,

    this is an extremely nice piece...incredible...can I call it "priceless?"

    this hit a brother deep like the piece ran through my veins...I bow my head to you.

    one love,blak
     
  9. Afridancr

    Afridancr Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Agree wit Sunshyne!

    Speaking from personal experience...No DOUBT she's right!:)

    Keep up the flow...it's tyght!!!:)
     
  10. UbZoRbShUn

    UbZoRbShUn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    hey B, our words are here for all to partake. sometimes i come in and just bask in the kwu on the pages. like sista shery said keep reading keep reading keep reading



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