Black Poetry : For A Moment

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  1. mzpoetic8705

    mzpoetic8705 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Relax,
    For a moment I want to liberate myself
    Allow myself to run free
    Become acquainted with
    Unwind,
    Exhale,
    Inhale so deeply a sensation beyond this lifetime
    Can barely permit my skin to touch
    Feelings come over me and I just want to grab and hold
    Rap my legs around
    Hug and kiss
    Denying these feelings to be true
    I suspend all thoughts of you
    Want to be gentle in perceiving
    Petrified of deception
    Running away to an unknown place
    Time has stopped
    Releasing it all
    Allowing all petals to fall
    Assuming you’d catch them
    No need to exchange words
    Your movement speaks for itself
    Follow me,
    I want to take you to a place deeper than minds that think
    Stimulating your mind
    Undressing and dissecting it
    Caress my thoughts and
    Seduce my speech
    Breathing harder now
    Gentle and slow
    Exotic words
    Allowing my spine to curve
    Still alive and breathing his truth
    Oh, release and let go
    Allow me to seduce you
    With my words
    Exotic with his verbs
    And there sits I
    Alone
    Wondering if this could ever be true,
    You and me
    Or maybe it’s just another fallacy
    Destined to be fooled
    Still I am willing to allow myself to fall for you
    Hoping not to be made a fool
    I play it cool
    Writing poems
    Discovering truth behind
    Analyzing
    Coming to a conclusion
    Change is what makes us human
    How can one grow without it?
    Peace amongst the pen and the paper
    For allowing me to write these thoughts of you
    And love to God for giving me the words

    To be continued


    --MzPoetic8705
     
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    4EVERLUV Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    mzpoetic totally Beautiful...

    I really enjoyed this read. Nice work.
     
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    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Not just a moment, but a very power packed Moment. That was/is a awesome piece poet.
     
  4. mzpoetic8705

    mzpoetic8705 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks all for the love :)
     
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    This was so eloquently sensual poetess, and it read so smoothly. To be continued, huh? I'd love to read more--great scribe!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    for that moment inside the moment i was shocked
    love this piece next pt i want more ......................
     
  7. mzpoetic8705

    mzpoetic8705 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    again, thanks for the love guys :) and i am definitely trying to get my writing back in to play...lol...it's hard though, but there will be a part two to this :)
     
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