Black Poetry : For A Lady I Know

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  1. DigginThaShyne

    DigginThaShyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    She’s….
    a breeze, cool and graceful,
    quietly violating trees,
    but they don’t mind
    in fact, they’re strangely inclined to be quite pleased,
    as she climbs, polite but forceful,
    over each and every exposed limb,
    manifesting
    a sort of
    kinetic need,
    moving them into
    wanting her more,

    She’s…
    sunrise to habitually dark places,
    foreign, exotic,
    mysteriously erotic
    akin to that first brush with sin,
    how can something so supposedly bad
    feel so **** good,
    senses spiraling erratically,
    as she charismatically
    draws crowd upon crowd
    of devotees

    She’s…
    special, specifically in the charming way
    she acknowledges surmounting passion
    by plunging attentively into
    each individual pleasure like
    it
    sustains her,
    helps retain her femininity,
    and substantially satisfies that growing affinity
    for life lived to the fullest

    She’s…
    herself, and that’s the most important reason
    I give praises
    for a lady I know
     
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    herlove Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    now, i don't think i ever meet u, yet you seem to know me so well...... smile i love this read love it
     
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    mj.


    awww... thank you for writing such a beautiful peace
    about me!! :lol: hahaha... okay. okay. this was sweet
    & serene. i love the way you use your words, chile!
    have i told you lately that i think you are extremely
    talented?? ('cause i do!!)

    itsallLove.

    elayne.
     
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    DigginThaShyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Ladies,
    thank you both for the wonderful responses...they are greatly appreciated....and I'm sure you both know that there are men all around you whose thoughts of you are embodied in this poem

    and elayne....
    now, you know that I get my talent from the extra that you've left floating around....thanks :)

    keep scribin'

    MJ
     
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