Black Poetry : For A Daddy's Girl (Haiku)

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  1. Heartbeat

    Heartbeat Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Tears fall from your eyes
    Remember you are the prize
    He the lucky one

    BE
     
  2. alyce

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    every time

    I read of love between fathers and daughters; I am reminded of the man who has given me so much throughout my life. And any father's daughter so beautifully blessed....will do well if she finds a man who will recognize her as the prize she is. (it's hard to beat Daddy's love, tho) :wink:



    thank you for this

    a
     
  3. cocobutterskyn

    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Heartbeat,

    What you've said in this Haiku is why a lil'girl needs her father in her life to teach her at an early age, that she is a prize...This touched my heart...Very nice piece.


    Fathers teach daughters
    How she is to be treated
    With love and respect.

    Madd Sistahly Love :heart:
    CCBSKYN
     
  4. msluciousb

    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    SOUNDS LIKE SOMETHING MY DADDY WOULD SAY!

    YOU SPEAK IN SUCH A PROPHETIC
    WAY I COULD READ YOU ALL DAY.
    BUT THIS ONE REALLY MAKES
    ME SMILE!
    SOUNDED LIKE SOMETHING MY DADDY
    MIGHT SAY ...IF HE WERE STILL ALIVE TODAY!
    AND IN YOU WORDS I HEARD HIM WHISPER
    BE BLESSED FOR YOU ARE A BLESSING!
     
  5. Kitana

    Kitana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    sweet love

    BE..
    all little girls need to feel like a princess sometimes...
    and when a daddy loves his little girl, he makes her feel like a princess always...

    K
     
  6. poeticdelight

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    this was so sweet

    pd
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    all man this one here

    makes me smile and smile and smile:D
     
  8. epiphany

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    This is so sweet....

    Somehow Daddy always can make it better.....beautifully written,
    heartbeat.

    Epiphany :heart:
     
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