Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Heartbeat, Oct 29, 2001.
Tears fall from your eyes
Remember you are the prize
He the lucky one
I read of love between fathers and daughters; I am reminded of the man who has given me so much throughout my life. And any father's daughter so beautifully blessed....will do well if she finds a man who will recognize her as the prize she is. (it's hard to beat Daddy's love, tho)
thank you for this
What you've said in this Haiku is why a lil'girl needs her father in her life to teach her at an early age, that she is a prize...This touched my heart...Very nice piece.
Fathers teach daughters
How she is to be treated
With love and respect.
Madd Sistahly Love
SOUNDS LIKE SOMETHING MY DADDY WOULD SAY!
YOU SPEAK IN SUCH A PROPHETIC
WAY I COULD READ YOU ALL DAY.
BUT THIS ONE REALLY MAKES
SOUNDED LIKE SOMETHING MY DADDY
MIGHT SAY ...IF HE WERE STILL ALIVE TODAY!
AND IN YOU WORDS I HEARD HIM WHISPER
BE BLESSED FOR YOU ARE A BLESSING!
all little girls need to feel like a princess sometimes...
and when a daddy loves his little girl, he makes her feel like a princess always...
this was so sweet
all man this one here
makes me smile and smile and smile
This is so sweet....
Somehow Daddy always can make it better.....beautifully written,
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