Khasm13 : footprints...

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  1. Khasm13

    Khasm13 STAFF STAFF

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    as soaring salty waves
    crash against my body
    i am reminded that some forces
    cannot be dealt with
    they are just to be taken as the come

    as tall tides slide over my dreads
    the battalion of bubbles whisper to me
    you are man
    do not assume too much
    the essence of life is to stay in touch
    with your surroundings

    as the sand shifts and covers my ankles
    i allow myself to be taken by the gigantic atlantic
    the contents of the sea pass right through me
    and i feel the potent power internally

    as the current wisps me away into 7/10 of the world
    the proper perspective is placed
    on material wealth and possessions
    because life is more than what you have
    life is about how long your footprints lasts
    in the ever changing sand
     
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    PlayWitItPimp05 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This is a fresh twist for you....
    Very calm, cool, and collected....

    Lovin dis flow.

    :heart: :heart: PLAY :heart: :heart:
     
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    I agree with playwith it..this is a different approach for ya but I likes never theless :) :) :heart:....your' right too some things are just too big to handle. (KHAS WHERE YA BEEN?? ) I love this scribe :) :heart:
     
  4. Khasm13

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    been on vacation...
    but now im back
    in full effect
    watch out...
    peace
    khasm
     
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    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    A MASTERFUL EFFORT!
     
  6. Khasm13

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    thanks 1poet
    i got inspired in daytona last week
    when i was in the atlantic
    and a wave took me out further that i was trying to go
    thank God my moms taught me how to swim good
    or it might have been one...

    play and swt
    you're right
    my vacation calmed me down a bit
    just wait
    in no time i'll be back to my old self
    peace
    khasm
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    look out dis was awesome flowin'
    tyte scribe poet!
    little time away has u in motion love dis piece
     
  8. Khasm13

    Khasm13 STAFF STAFF

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    thanks rich
    da vacation was truely needed...
    now back to biz
    peace
    khasm
     
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    How long your footprints last in the everlasting sand..."Well said"
     
  10. aqueenpassing

    aqueenpassing Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This is beautiful so very well said....

    AqueenPassing
    :wave:
     
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