Black Poetry : Footloose and Free

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  1. Earthly Allure

    Earthly Allure Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The satisfaction
    came when
    I realized
    I was
    no
    longer held by the
    feeling
    that I absolutely
    needed you in
    my life.
    When that
    feeling left
    I became free.
    Free
    to breath and live,
    Free to fly higher
    and higher,
    Free to
    experience
    an expressive side
    of life
    that had been denied
    me for sometime,
    With the sunlight
    breaking through
    my dark
    clouds,
    My midnight turned
    to day.
    Free
    entered my
    life and
    made me
    see
    that Free
    was the only
    way
    to be.
    I am not dependent
    on another
    for my shade of happiness
    but Free
    as free
    can be.

    Copyright 2004 A.D/ "Suga Shack Inc.
    ~Earthly Allure
     
  2. Bluewater

    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this is a nice flow
    I can feel the ease
    in this scibe
    flow on
    nice indeed
    Peace
    BlueWater:heart:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    yes indeed free as free
    lovin ya scribe here wow!
    FLOW ON SISTAH
     
  4. poeticly_yours

    poeticly_yours Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i like this a lot. I know the feeling. Like when you need someone so much they have you trapped and when you finally let that person go you feel a new sense of freedom you never knew you had
    Im loving it
     
  5. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i really likes this scribe
    cool
    continue on
    very nice
    Peace
    Angel
     
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    I think a lot of us can relate to this, I liked the ease that you flowed with this here.
     
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    Antar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this felt really unrestricted
    flowed like liquid


    one,
    /antar
     
  8. Earthly Allure

    Earthly Allure Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you all so much. The love is absolutely beautiful and I am touched. May all of your pen's continue to be blessed.
    ~Earthly Allure
     
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    This is a beautiful read.
     
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    Earthly Allure Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you ma. Your love is appreciated greatly.
    ~Earthly Allure
     
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