Quiet Poetry Lounge : FOOT NOTE to my beloveth

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Dancing in ya love
    ya embrace cover me
    from the words of ya
    deep pen the ink
    splash like warm desires
    my heart melts under ya
    fire my belove i loom in
    da web of ya essence
    tasting the rapture
    i've missed u for so long
    now i'm ready to come home
    can u forgive me
    for my mind not what it was
    i now know the lonelyness
    and the break of soul
    i cry in the mist of ya love
    see the moment has come
    and i need u like before
    i never left just was lost
    may the well continue wet
    and answer me !

    A Dyamondluv splash
    ~ NuWave Production ~
    $R 2005
     
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    come my beloveth king
    within your arms i long to be
    yet i know u was lost
    but never left for i awaited
    for i know thy love was true
    i am here as promised
    for i have answered thee

    :hearts2: :hearts2:

    you touched me as i read i felt the embrace of your pen :kiss:

    this was so perfect love it

    :kiss1:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    unto u i cometh
    wit warmth of heart
    my loveth lone da day
    i so been lost yet found
    in the galaxy of love
    now my soul drift within
    back to the moment it left
    i stand not along
    spread ya arms for me
    embrace my spirit and
    behold the grace of my love
    for it wasn't i but lords will

    Thankz sista for the flow and feeling the depth of my pen ...
     
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    Deeply, I sigh
    as you dance
    beneath my luv
    it's not by chance
    nor a fool's paradise
    or happenstance
    it's heaven sent
    somehow this is known
    forgiveness is there when
    understanding is shown
    and reasons are brought
    clearly into the light
    although true love stands
    from dawn of day to end of nite
    God tells me to embrace
    what he knows is right
    I answer thee, yes, as
    our hearts once again unite
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    that was nice sista watz the flow thankz for entering my splash
    of Nu wave
     
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    Keita Kenyatta going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    Dizzaam! Can we get some water here !! This was some passionate flow my bro. Surely you going back and she takin ya ! Too hot fo me !
     
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    hey keita man when love floatz freely it holds no boundary
    thankz for the visit into the Nu wave.........
     
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    what Keita said... :D

    whew...it's "Passionate" up in this thread...

    let me give my kudos...and get going...lol

    Awesome work...Love the title!
     
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    thankz Sage the foot note is a keep sake vow u know ....
     
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    this was just divine i love the essence that is flowing from this...i vow made within comes back alive...you just takes me Angel
     
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