Black Poetry : FOOT FETISH

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  1. MRS. LADY

    MRS. LADY Banned MEMBER

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    At first I glanced
    Positioned with lotus hands
    Took in the breath
    Only to kiss lotus feet

    I spoke not one word
    But I know he heard
    Me being wide awake
    Because he put me to sleep

    As I pedicured his toes
    I froze
    All the times of pain

    I asked please tell me your name

    He said

    My name I can not tell you
    Mere talk is rather cheap
    I wrote it on your heart long ago
    It was a secret for you to keep

    I kissed each toe
    And felt each bolt
    And decided not to speak

    I was much inclined
    To move up his spine
    While wakin love in his feet

    He read my desire like a book
    Because he almost reached his peak
    Ahhh he was stength
    But I knew where he was weak

    My fingers tickled each character line
    embroided at the bottom which in reality is the top
    I blushed like a little girl in love
    When he asked me not to stop

    He quietly laughed
    As I defiantly moved my mind
    Because I knew he wouldn't let me go
    So I imagined he was a tree
    And I was the freshly fallen snow

    And he shiverd
    Not from the cold
    But from the way my frozen water
    grazed each zone and quickly melted from his heat

    I touched each and every part of him
    But my hands and lips never left his feet
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    wow.......nice drop like how you did this one !
     
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    ha...freaked him on da toes....lol
    thas good ish right there....
    i liked these lines the best....

    one love
    khasm
     
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    Nice Flow Miss Lady

    Making him feel good from the feet into his mind.

    Nice Indeed.
     
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    MRS. LADY Banned MEMBER

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    Hotep Brothers

    thanks for the love....



    as i sweat
    out
    the fountain of youth...

    the truth

    even the ground is sacred
    where he marks his path

    i'd kiss his toes and drink the water
    in the sea where he skinney dips for a bath

    his ancient voice
    roars to my soul
    transforms me into a dove

    his tree sprang up from the roots
    of my idea of
    what love once was

    in fact it's a fact
    all i think of is his feet

    but he told
    me hush and
    not to rush
    he'll thrust
    my every achy breaky heartbeat

    and when our souls of conciousness
    secrete and meet
    I'll wake up from this heated sleep

    But today
    I must lay
    And sleep the soundless night away

    And how I wish
    A bliss-full wish
    That tomorrow was today
     
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    You took both of these to a whole 'nother level!
     
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