Black Poetry : foolish

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  1. brown_N_sassy06

    brown_N_sassy06 Member MEMBER

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    foolish
    i was foolish to think that i could have all of you
    foolish
    to think that i could take part of you let yoy take part of me and not feel the way i do
    foolish
    i was dumb for thinking i could give so much of me and think i would be alright
    foolish
    to get at you w hne you were feelijg down and blue over another female
    foolsih
    for thinking that i would be okay with just being undercover lovers
    foolish
    for thinking you would respect me enough to keep our passion to yourself
    foolish
    for thinking that i would be the one and only girl ou would press your bidy against
    foolish
    for not thinking that thet firts kiss would lead to trouble
    foolish
    for kissing you with my eyes closed so tight for loving the way your lips tasted so sweet they were to good for me
    foolish
    for thinking t hat my love our love would bring you back to me
    foolish
    for thinking it would last for more thatn one night
    foolish
    for giving my virginity to a guy who didn't give a @#$! about me
    foolish
    for thinking that your cinnamon skin looked good next to my chocolate
    foolish
    for thinking that you would ever appreciate the gift i had given you
    foolish
    for thinking that there would be a you and me
    foolish
    for thinking that i coulod be you know what never mind i wasted my time on you and thinking about everything you do because i know you don't think about me it's plain to see but i'm still
    foolish
    for still hoping you'd come back
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    sometime we can be mislead i feel u here
    we feel foolish for the choice we make when it become
    a bad seed to our gentle hearts ..............................

    welcome to destee.com poetic playground
    welcome to the new home u found
    welcome from above as i bless this some love
     
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    peace,

    nothing foolish about being in love sista..........

    "fall in love with the mind instead of the body"

    peace
     
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    Monetary going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    brown_N_sassy06

    Nice flow...but, like Info-Moetry said..there's nothing foolish about fallin' in love. The foolish part is not knowing when to let go when things ain't working out right. You'll know when. :wink:

    :thanks: for sharing this part of your life with the Fam.

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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nice vibe enjoyed the read and agree with Monetary and info-moetry...there's nothing foolish about fallin' in love

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