Black Poetry : Foolish

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by sahara heart, May 20, 2004.

  1. sahara heart

    sahara heart Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    the feelings pour out onto this blank page like a river flowing ever so violently
    stuborn and foolish of me to believe
    that i was the apple of your eye
    the sunshine of your life
    your one true love
    Now the realization of the truth hits me with a force that won't leave me...
    My heart is swollen with anger, pain, sorrow...
    tears choke me
    I want to let go but my head is now weaker than my heart

    Darkness fills my thoughts, lost and falling deep down into a bottomless pit
    Who will save me from myself from myself?
    For once, I dont want to be in the place I am right now.
    Impossible to erase the thoughts of you
    Unreciprocated love, never once noticed
    How could I be so foolish?
    Dont know what hurts me most...
    The lies or all the love I gave????
     
  2. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hard to know what hurts more, but the pain can be unbearable. One of those situations you have to put in the hands of a higher power, and don't beat yourself up in the meantime. Feeling this piece.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    what seem a lost is a bigger gain
    the deep inner pain rips da heart
    yet it will mend to a sunny day ahead
     
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    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    That's ever so true...the heart is a self-healer. Use this time wisely and get to spoil yourself, love and pamper you...
    Master "Inside love"...and the outside will follow. thanks for sharing this part of you with us.
     
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