Black Poetry : ...foolish (revisiting old feelings).

GA_Sunshyne

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The PeAcH State
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you seem to make a fool
of me… every time…
i allow myself to believe
that you & me will ever
amount to any thing…
other than perfunctory
passers-by who only claim
to be alwaysalways loving

& i just don’t get it…
could never… in all honesty
comprehend it… are you
really that afraid of me?

i’m only asking ‘cause…

you have a way of making
me feel… so **** dumb
…every time i come to the
erroneous conclusion that
in fact… there may be a
chance for us to trust in
each other again… like we did
so many moons ago
(& i did trust you.)

but just like a vinyl version
of ourstory… the melody
becomes major-ly distorted
by the lack of that compact disk
type fluency… when you
repeatedly pull me close to you
while simultaneously telling me to
…go away from you
& this is when i get confused
… the song loses it’s soothing
tune & i feel like such a fool

& no… i just don’t get it…
i’m sure i’ll never completely
understand it… i find it difficult
to believe that you’re really
that afraid of me.



© SunShyneOrygynals 2002, all rights reserved.
 

GA_Sunshyne

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alwaysthanks.


sherrie. to your 1st response... wow! i'm glad
i could inspire deep reflection in you. & to your 2nd
response... this is actually a new peace... i've had a
few folks askin' for some sunshyne... i wrote this
tonite & thought... "what the hell! go back to your
roots!" :D

itsallLove, chile.
 

Kitana

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GA...

this is one of those times when you just want to REALLY love someone and you want so badly for it to be returned in full, not just skin deep so to speak... and it leaves you with that EMPTY feeling somewhere down deep, wondering where the hell you went wrong!!..and it isn't even your fault...

K
 

GA_Sunshyne

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kt. thank you! Thank You!! ...for symply
summing this peace up... in it's entirety. i was
hoping to achieve that "hopeless" kinda feeling...
& you have affirmed for me that it worked!! :)
i appreciate your comments... (as ALLways!)

itsallLove, chile.
 

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