Black Poetry : ...foolish (revisiting old feelings).

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  1. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    you seem to make a fool
    of me… every time…
    i allow myself to believe
    that you & me will ever
    amount to any thing…
    other than perfunctory
    passers-by who only claim
    to be alwaysalways loving

    & i just don’t get it…
    could never… in all honesty
    comprehend it… are you
    really that afraid of me?

    i’m only asking ‘cause…

    you have a way of making
    me feel… so **** dumb
    …every time i come to the
    erroneous conclusion that
    in fact… there may be a
    chance for us to trust in
    each other again… like we did
    so many moons ago
    (& i did trust you.)

    but just like a vinyl version
    of ourstory… the melody
    becomes major-ly distorted
    by the lack of that compact disk
    type fluency… when you
    repeatedly pull me close to you
    while simultaneously telling me to
    …go away from you
    & this is when i get confused
    … the song loses it’s soothing
    tune & i feel like such a fool

    & no… i just don’t get it…
    i’m sure i’ll never completely
    understand it… i find it difficult
    to believe that you’re really
    that afraid of me.



    © SunShyneOrygynals 2002, all rights reserved.
     
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    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    alwaysthanks.


    sherrie. to your 1st response... wow! i'm glad
    i could inspire deep reflection in you. & to your 2nd
    response... this is actually a new peace... i've had a
    few folks askin' for some sunshyne... i wrote this
    tonite & thought... "what the hell! go back to your
    roots!" :D

    itsallLove, chile.
     
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    GA...

    this is one of those times when you just want to REALLY love someone and you want so badly for it to be returned in full, not just skin deep so to speak... and it leaves you with that EMPTY feeling somewhere down deep, wondering where the hell you went wrong!!..and it isn't even your fault...

    K
     
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    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    kt. thank you! Thank You!! ...for symply
    summing this peace up... in it's entirety. i was
    hoping to achieve that "hopeless" kinda feeling...
    & you have affirmed for me that it worked!! :)
    i appreciate your comments... (as ALLways!)

    itsallLove, chile.
     
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    I thought you were gone...hmmmmmm......Naw leave it alone...anyway tight scribe...classic sunshyne.
     
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    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nawl... i ain't gone. you should know that better
    than anyone... or at least i know you can get wit
    that split personality typa ****! :lol: don't play!
    anyway... thank you for takin' the time, my dear.

    itsallLove.
     
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    LiLi Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Kitana summed up what i was thinking...it causes me to reflect on a situation that i've been working thru in my head...thought that all of those emotions had finally dissipated...guess not...

    very, very, nice peace hun!
     
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    i'm so diggin this reflection of old luv...
    i be puttin them old thoughts in my basement corner box.
    thank you!-7:spinstar:
     
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    Ga good to see you again
    ah baby baby gime one more chance gime one more chance
    please baby baby please (lol)
    lovin the flow
     
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    afraid of love?

    hey you sure know how to put feelings on paper poet

    DSS
     
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