Black Poetry : Fool of Me

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  1. SwtT

    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The quotes are from the song "Fool of Me"

    "You made a fool of me"....
    ...tell me why"............

    Tell me why...
    Whats the reason?
    I broke down ;I lost it ..
    Won't regain my senses for a season
    That night in January...
    I loved you soo much
    You filled me with a undying memory
    Back and forth as I started to clutch
    And to top off that night
    You never broke my glane
    I massaged your back
    Ans my fingers did a dance
    And now, what have we become
    Distant as the sun...
    We've seen each other naked
    I cry at what we've become

    "..you say that you don't care but...
    "we made love".....

    Tell me *****?.....
    Why did you diss me?....
    Ok, we chose to just stay friends
    But you never call me!!!
    It wasn't just that night we shared...
    We shared a few others too..
    I can't believe I was such a fool
    Acting crazy over you.....

    "Does she want you with the pain....
    ...that I do?"

    And you never broke up with her?..
    But you had the ***^kin nerve....
    That fact shattered my heart....
    I can't say anything..I jut can't find the words.....
    And EVERYBODY KNEW!!!!
    They just though that I was cool....
    But Fu&k you ***** cuz I wasn't..
    I was just made to look like the fool
     
  2. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this is so good!!! and know exactly how u feel...:(...but u displayed this perfectly...


    ~lovely~
     
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    skrybe7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Not a fool, I see a poet with a gift
    and mad material!
    Peace to ya!
     
  4. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    whoa !
    tyte scribe one so loveth it hurts
    i feel ya been their...............
     
  5. Rico

    Rico Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Nice Swt...Nice...he was stupid...he doesn't deserve you. Or what you gave..
     
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    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yeah he was "Breaking My heart" with those "(pReety Brown Eyes");( But I'm trying to bounce back.........I feel as If I haveno elastic in my bounce though....Grr....
    Lovely-Thanks so much! :wave:

    Thanks Skybe- :wave: I was listening to that song when I wrote it :heart:
    Rich :( Sometimes It stops hurting...but it comes back with a force thanks for reading ! :wave:
     
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    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Rico....:grouphug; thanks so much :)
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    when it strike allow me within ya mind to comfort
    ur feel better .......i feel u been their.
     
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    Rico Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :)..together we can change the world..
     
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    sarcasm4eva Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was truly hot..........much love :)
     
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