Black Poetry : Fool (my first post)

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Luver2B, May 11, 2004.

  1. Luver2B

    Luver2B Active Member MEMBER

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    Baby, take off your cool
    I want to be your fool
    Run around like your mule
    You could ride me to school
    Please use me like a tool
    I'll never feel un-full
    Unlike a public pool

    Listen, let me near you
    It is not that I want you
    The truth is, I need you
    I crave to flow in you
    Warm unlike Ice Bayou
    Let me be one with you
    Just me, myself, and you

    I feel like I'm the night
    Craving to see your light
    You would open my sight
    And hug me real tight
    Take away all my fright
    It would be a sweet delight
    I promise not to fight
     
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    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Welcome Luver2B :wave:

    Nice rhythmic flow...
    love the music & rhyme

    Make yourself at home...
    We'll look for more work from you!
     
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    :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave: Yes YEs welcome
    Nice drop keep them coming
     
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    Welcome

    :grouphug: Welcome :grouphug:

    Alright now,diggin your first drop, hope to see much more from ya.
    Again welcome Home!
    :heart:
     
  5. Luver2B

    Luver2B Active Member MEMBER

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    Thank you very much Nita, THEONE, and AngelicSage. This site does feel like home; I've always wanted to share my writting with others, this is the best medium I've found so far, it definitely beats my AIM away message board. Thanks to the creators of this site for giving so many of us, part-time artist, a place to stretch our minds.
     
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    :wave:
    welcome to destee.com
    likes ya scribe hope to read more
    Peace
    Angel
     
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    caramelpython Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :hot: Welcome to the family poet.
    I like your style keep the post coming :coffee:
     
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    welcome fellow poet...
    please feel free to drop your pieces
    anytime the urge arises...:wink:
    one love
    khasm
     
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    This piece made me smile, would like to hear more. Welcome to destee!
     
  10. triniti424

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    hmmmm welcome luver :wave:
    I am glad you are home :grouphug: interesting piece...
     
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