Black Poetry : Foodstamp Millionaire-Uncut Mix

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by mysslez, Feb 20, 2001.

  1. mysslez

    mysslez Member MEMBER

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    Superficial *******
    upon which your life snitches
    of Tommy and Nautica masquerades
    and the many beds on which you lay
    your head to rest
    soul sufferin' lest
    Down on your knees tryin' to repent
    as man-made toxins ferment
    And take control of your body cavity
    while soul searches for a clean place to breathe
    a breath of fresh air
    Still you continue without a care
    with the million dollar smirk
    self-centered jerk
    Deep-throatin' every dick in the projects
    to build clientel
    And Silky Big Pimpin'
    leavin' your eyes to swell
    'cuz you spent his endz
    to quench your heroine thirst
    providing halluciantin' bursts
    Personal ad readin'
    "Urban Ho for Hire wit' Class
    Gov't Leanin' GED dropout ***"
    Yet your head is elevated
    Spinal cord erect
    'cuz you too scared to look down
    Afraid to fall and stand up correct
    on your OWN feet
    Off those tired, worn out knees.....

    -MYSS LEZ R.A.W.
    ORI. APRIL 29, 2000
     
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    Destee destee.com STAFF

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    uuuhhh ... anybody i know ... ??

    <just kidding>

    another deep peace

    :wave:
     
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    Amun-Ra Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Got to Give it Up

    You have said a mouthful here--loved it--straight to the point and certainly on target--Nichelle would be a fan--I certainly am--Bravo--Amun-Ra
     
  4. Nita

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    :)

    Jus wanted to bring this one back....love'n the flava
     
  5. mysslez

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    Thank You

    This is still one of my favorite pieces....I haven't written in a while....I'm not feeling the focus and inspiration...perhaps this will get me back on track....
     
  6. Nita

    Nita Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    man

    it's funny how God works, you been MIA, now it's time to come out of this quiet spell and start blessin us again. Glad to see you again.Come on back home :wave:
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Well now, this shot straight from the hip. This happens, many a time spent on knees, not in prayer....potent drop.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    well i be i tell ya it happens whewwwwwwwwwww!!
     
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