Black Poetry : food for thought

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by sheikdadon, Aug 14, 2006.

  1. sheikdadon

    sheikdadon Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    where can i go on devastating nights like this
    when im awoke from my inner demons n torment
    not sista soulja but its da codest winta ever
    summer n fall=2many wks.so 2me its never
    im ready to put misery to bed in da jungle
    concealed lions ready to rumble
    breakin me off to a balck abyss
    meandering into pure nothingnss
    what can make a gurl feel llike this
    one wird. its emptiness
    i cant smile or bleed
    that be showing emotions i aint got
    just like da grammar i fa got
    cant eat or sleep
    2much **** troubles me
    i shed silent tears no release
    hands crossed as i sleep in peace
    caught in purgatory
    not wantin 2 deal
    made a deal wit da devil
    my fate is sealed
    lay wit dogs contract fleas
    ppl said thered be days like these...
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very nicely pose'd once again .....
     
  3. choclatangel

    choclatangel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    liked they way you put this down, real raw you just let it flow how it wanted to flow.
     
  4. Omowale Jabali

    Omowale Jabali The Cosmic Journeyman PREMIUM MEMBER

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    "meandering into pure nothingness"

    I sure can relate!

    nice drop!!
     
  5. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    yea

    when you are in a rut you just want it to end but when will it end?

    is the question

    but it will
    you know they say all good things come to an end
    well so do the bad things too

    good luck poet
     
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