Black Haiku : following forreal

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by TotalView, Jun 6, 2011.

  1. TotalView

    TotalView Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    man you excite me
    googling to find your book
    no clue 'bout your name

    checking facebook too
    not stalking you direct just
    your prolific mind

    hear instruments too
    imaginary paintings
    adorning my walls

    artistry in mind
    can you help a sister out
    lead me to the grail

    later i'll pretend
    i'm aloof and stuff, in truth
    i love your work man
     
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    skuderjaymes Contextualizer Synthesizer MEMBER

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    wow.. I never saw this.. Im blushing again.. ;)
     
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    Brother Poet Skuderjaymes,

    There you go with that blushing. (smile) Seriously I was thinking, "He could have at least hit a sister up with a like...after all it did take me an entire 5 minutes to write this haiku." (smile) I got the book so I'm happy. Thank you.
     
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    man you excite me
    frequencies forever synced
    as one single thing
     
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