Black Haiku : Follow up wanted

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by candeesweet, Jun 28, 2013.

  1. candeesweet

    candeesweet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Who seems to know where​
    To end the sentence at now​
    The mind leaves body strokes​
     
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    Playin' by yourself​
    Ain't always as bad as it​
    Seems to be for real​
     
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    Teachings from wrong​
    Way ain't never gonna be​
    Right has to change mind​
     
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    I don't care about​
    Stuff that's carelessly spoken​
    No understanding​
    Choosey lovers be​
    What they heart need the most​
    While overstanding​
     
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    Fly me to the moon
    let me play among the stars
    Venus ain't too far... :Zzz:
     
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    All I got to look ​
    I see me in u u in​
    I was @ once free​
     
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