Black Poetry : Focus

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by shaneak, Jul 18, 2001.

  1. shaneak

    shaneak Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I feel like I have an obligation...
    I don't want to give no false hope...
    False Representation....

    I said i would like out for you...
    I said i would do all that i can do...
    But first you have to believe that you can make it through...

    Your still dwelling on the past....
    When now you need to focus on your future...
    I was told i need to change my ways...
    I never thought I'd be telling someone else that someday....
    You're losing your focus...
    Forgetting your goals....
    Don't worry...
    I'll be there when you need a shoulder to cry on....

    I'm giving you a chance to grow...
    But first you must let some things go...
    Sit back and think about your plans...
    Tell me how you can become a real man...
    Tell me what you wanna do...
    I'm listening...
    I believe in you...
    Focus...on the better things in life...
    Focus...on making it through all the pain and strife...

    Focus....
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    LOOKING AHEAD

    TO BRIGHTER DAYZ FROM DA PAST OF YESTERDAYZ NEWS
    AND IN TOMORROWZ BEINGS AND FORGET ALL PAST BEHIND
    ME ....................THANKZ I NEED THIS.:kiss: :kiss:
     
  3. shaneak

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    You are Quite Welcome....

    I'm glad i could be of help...I wrote this because of my cousin. Him and my brother is supposably moving in with me..and they beefing already...over unnecessary things...more or so upset because i give my brother more attention than him. I had to let him know....I'm not his reason for being here. I love them both like my brother but my brother is my brother...regardless. And he needs to focus on him and his reasons for being here. I guess i'm getting too old for this...I know i don't need no kids huh... lol
     
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    SURE U DO!!

    JUST ONE MAYBE.......BUT I FEEL U
    MY LIL SIS WAS THE SAME WAY WHEN SHE
    LIVED WIT ME ...SO GLAD SHE GOT MARRIED
    AND MOVED.....THATS PART OF OUR EVERYDAY
    LIFE I TELL ITS A FAMILY THANG!!:heart:
     
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    LMAO!!!!

    You know you got me tripping right!!! I just hope this hold thing blows over and they do what they are suppose to do while their here. From the way they were talking last night...They were about to throw all their plans away. I just don't get it.
     
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    My Sister Cindy!!!!

    You couldn't be more right... I totally agree with you. I hope who everyone who reads it benefits from it!!! I'm glad you liked it...;)
     
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    Sha

    simply loving your focus

    i don't have to tell So'ja LOVE stuff like this
    you got me all pumped and ready to keep my focus

    yes Sha this is what i'm loving


    Peace


    <DSS>
    -------------------------------------------------
    Don't hate me - hate my environment
     
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    Sha-Sha....


    ...i appreciate this flow... more than you know!!

    everybody needs a little reminder every now & then
    to stay focused... so thank you for sharing this today!

    AlwaysLove.
    SunShyne~
     
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    shaneak Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Awww Mannn....

    You guys got me over here feeling so proud...like i done did something. :p
    Soja: I'm glad you liked it...now you already to conquer the world.... ;)
    GA: Ya Got it back..your focus dhat is...Now you take whatever head on...

    Everyone...Keep your Focus....you'll see some great results in the end!!!!
     
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