Black Poetry : Flying High

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Sista Steele, Jan 10, 2003.

  1. Sista Steele

    Sista Steele Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Morning air
    Crisp
    Fresh on my face
    Sun rising
    Birds chirping
    I’m leaving your place

    I’m exhausted and sleepy
    From our bout last night
    Satisfied and happy
    Filled up right

    New music in my ride
    I just left your side
    What a wonderful feeling
    As I hit the freeway
    Speeding

    I can’t be late
    There’s duties to attend
    I’m content and at peace
    Can we do it again

    c 2001 ST
     
  2. lpoet

    lpoet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nice

    short and sweet just like i like um

    keep up the good work
     
  3. Sista Steele

    Sista Steele Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks lp. congrats on POTW!
     
  4. Bishop

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    Let's do it again
    is the song played
    as I drive through the streets
    thinking about
    our last meeting
    breaking out in a sweat
    at every thought
    of our passionate
    discourse
    causing me to alter my course
    and meet you at your residence.
     
  5. Sista Steele

    Sista Steele Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    that was tight.
     
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    Bishop Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    just building on your flow....hope you don't mind.
     
  7. Sista Steele

    Sista Steele Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Not at all. I like your capabilities... impressive.
     
  8. LISTERSCRIBIN'

    LISTERSCRIBIN' Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    very cute piece. i like it! keep on scribin', gurl.
     
  9. Sista Steele

    Sista Steele Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks Lister...preiate it!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very beautiful flow
    see da smile and ya glow
    in flyte of skies so blue
    and poetic vibe in u
    sweet mask of air
    counter part wit all we know
    loving ya depth of vibe poet!
     
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