Quiet Poetry Lounge : Fly

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by iwannabe, Aug 24, 2005.

  1. iwannabe

    iwannabe Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    With wings you can evade
    but that doesn't mean reality fades,
    that just means that it's not in your face
    so, you can forget the taste.
    It's a human reflex- denial.
    But eventually, most facades shall flee,
    most lies will be seen
    as they are really meant to be,
    as harmful falsities,
    and where do you want to be when this occurs?
    In a realm of delusion, or a world of fact?

    Where you are affects how you will react
    when the truth comes back,
    or when realness comes at
    you,
    for it too
    can fly.
    I assure you that it can find
    you, wherever you soar.

    Hi im Ade...kinda new here so someone make me feel wanted, lol.
    www.poetrypoem.com/iwannabe
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  2. Wisdom7

    Wisdom7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hi welcome to Destee! I really liked this one, Whats done in the dark will come out in the light!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    welcome within we happy to have u within us as us
    ya family here so flow give love and grown
    tyte scribe u vibe here flow on poet
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Can't hide from the truth forever, it has its way of catching up on us all. I love the way you crafted this piece.
     
  5. notbeautiful

    notbeautiful Active Member MEMBER

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    ...when realness comes at you, for it too can fly...

    And this poem flies to me. I feel the real. Nice job :)